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Post by mostlyharmless on Mar 2, 2007 12:41:45 GMT -5
this is sort of a reference to my book again, but if anyone has anything they write and would subtly like to share with the human race to acquiesce your tortured artist self, you should post it here and talk about it. and stuff. here's one of mine (be nice [not really]):
I tell you in a preacher-like tone - like an old, proud, rusty, peaceful, revolutionary of the sixties remembering his causes and the maybe
naïve
result of, well, believing In his belief system believing the only way it knows how with passion and rigor - now getting a little tired. complete freedom of (horrible horrible human) choice and opinion.
I say it with a deep, woody, dormant, voice of a wan na be revolutionary with passion and rigor or rigor mortis
. . . ?
I tell you and will rant on about absolutely nothing and feel pretty damn satisfied in myself (such a bitch) I will tell you every decision I make is a result of my dependencies on the advance of the technological human race. and what all of you think of me and vice versa. I tell you that what I really am is i am really is a
is a
is a
. . .
no words
The rate of the diction Is completely Dependent on the level Of conviction You are so So So So-so So Stuck.
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gena
still doesn't get it
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Post by gena on Mar 2, 2007 13:47:45 GMT -5
"Fluid motion-- a school of ballet squid float by on ideas. Jellyfish pulse blood through the seas of paradoxical inquiry. Vitality is underwater breathing, submersion, drowning. Graceful tangibility is reached fathoms beneath these urban seaside realities. The light breaks on the mirrored surface and fish scatter. Waves continue unbroken, rocking the weightless heavy body beneath, suspended tensionless, air expelled slowly bursting forth, release."
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Post by mostlyharmless on Mar 3, 2007 4:22:18 GMT -5
When it Loses all inhibition And shows you it’s Rendition of everything You Wish You saw.
That’s, that’s That’s really it right there.
Phew.
When it totally Shows you Nothing Too special Just everything You could be/do/are/might/aren’t/everything/nothing at all Ad infinitum Ad Astra Add Mother Fucking Forever And you just Have to convince yourself You know what it’s screaming about And go on With your little Daily Life In absolute God-damned Awe (you better believe it)
as your mind feels like the rippling, breathing tide, as your thoughts bubble up and expell into the air for people to breathe, examine, exhale, repeat. breathe, examine, exhale, repeat.
ahh,
That really is it, right there. You know what I mean?
Ahhh Hh Hhhh Hhh -
Yeah. Yeah. You do !
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Post by Brendan on Mar 7, 2007 20:41:11 GMT -5
I have been writing short stories recently.
I would post one if I wasn't so sure that Josh would tear me a new one.
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gena
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Post by gena on Mar 7, 2007 22:26:11 GMT -5
Exactly. Exactly why I am waiting for him to mock us. Me, at least.
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Post by mostlyharmless on Mar 8, 2007 17:51:53 GMT -5
i will defend you
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